Lord’s Prayer Paraphrase

Had a go at this yesterday – doesn't seem quite right yet but am still quite pleased:

Our holy and heavenly Father
Come and rule, in us and around us,
So that Your desires for the world come to life.
And keep us alive, with food and with forgiveness,
Helping us to pass on those gifts.
Protect us from temptation,
Support us when we walk in darkness,
And lead us to Yourself;
Forever glorious, majestic and strong.
And that's the truth.


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